Psyence (holy_falling) wrote in websitereviewer,
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review for poofy.bit

website :: poofy.bit

owner :: pan


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first impression :: 4 / 5

the splash page looks clean, neat and alluring ^^ usually i would say that pale grey and orange don't really go, but now i'll say that it does ^_^ i especially like the background, mainly because it isn't one of those stripy backgrounds that give you a headache just from looking at it. i especially like the small border that appears around links when you hover over them - very pretty.

the only thing that i would say is wrong is that some people may not notice the 'fanlistings | requirements | affiliates' text. i think that you should make this jump out a bit more, maybe my putting some kind of symbol on each side of the text because i, for on, had trouble finding it later on because it hadn't stuck in my mind enough that it was on the main page. however, it's up to you and i'm only going on how i felt about it.


layout :: 4 / 5

the effect on kaoru is wonderful :3 as i said before i like the background and the i-frame looks incredibly cute [ maybe this is just me that thinks an i-frame can be cute though >.>; ] because it's so small <3 the only thing that i can say that is a bit funky are the 'x' and '+' links at the top of the i-frame. i understand that you might not want to write 'home' and 'tag board' there, but maybe making some kind of title in the html code would help. right now when you hover over the buttons it just says 'title: x' and 'title: +', which isn't much help. try chaging the 'x' and '+' in the title to something like 'home' and 'tag board' or somthing like that.


organization :: 5 / 5

your organization is perfect :3 everything is neat and tidy and i can't find anything that looks like it should be in a different section at all. very well done ^^v


content :: 5 / 5

the content fits perfectly with what you would expect for a personal site. i'm not going to mark you down for what i'm about to say, because it's something that is up to you, but i'll suggest it to you anyway. maybe you should link out to other sites as well as place links for your own site on poofy.bit? that way, people will feel more inclined to link to you if they know that they're going to get a link back.


ability to understand :: 4 / 5

as i've already said the 'x' and '+' buttons at the top of the navigation links are slightly confusing, and i've already suggested a way to fix that. i've also already said about the 'fanlistings | requirements | affiliates' text on the splash page, so i'll move on. there isn't really anything else that i can fault, seeing as i've covered it all already ¬ . ¬'


errors :: 3 / 5

the following errors are spelling errors ::

[ me ]
HABBITS: it annoys the hell out of my when people whisper, or talk with their mouths full. smoking isn't a very nice habbit either... but it's up to the individual - I'm not the tpye of person that will snatch a cigarette out of your mouth and tear it into pieces telling you to stop smoking, but I don't really like it when people smoke near me either...

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HABITS: it annoys the hell out of my when people whisper, or talk with their mouths full. smoking isn't a very nice habit either... but it's up to the individual - I'm not the type of person that will snatch a cigarette out of your mouth and tear it into pieces while telling you to stop smoking, but I don't really like it when people smoke near me either...

[ me ]
4. CATS: I'm very much a 'cat person'. my family seems to like collecting animals [cats being our speciality]. currently I am honoured enough to know 7 very special cats and 5 gorgeous kittens. a friend of my sisters' once said 'everywhere you look [in our house] you see at least 1 cat'. their names, you ask? going from the oldest: chaos, robert the bruce, flora mcdonald, pushkin, dylan, pablo picasso and mila shorts. and the kittens: ophelia, ptolemy, epsilon, gabriel and lucifer.

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4. CATS: I'm very much a 'cat person'. my family seems to like collecting animals [cats being our speciality]. currently I am honoured enough to know 7 very special cats and 5 gorgeous kittens. a friend of my sister once said 'everywhere you look [in our house] you see at least 1 cat'. their names, you ask? going from the oldest: chaos, robert the bruce, flora mcdonald, pushkin, dylan, pablo picasso and mila shorts. and the kittens: ophelia, ptolemy, epsilon, gabriel and lucifer.


bonus :: 4 / 5

you get bonus points for your beautiful art and wallpapers, which are very good, even if you say they aren't. also, you get bonus points for your other sites - which are all equally wonderful. i don't know if i'm allowed to give bonus points for other sites, but i am.


Overall :: 29/35 = great site


PSYENCE :: OUT

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